Bersham, Erddig, Ellesmere Autumnal part deux

[Robert Davies]

1 Cottage, Erddig - Always struck me as Hansel and Gretel-esque.... A red brick cottage deep in the woods.

2 Flood Plain, Erddig

This would be where the 1D's batteries died.... Onwards with the 10D!

3 Willow beside The Mere, Ellesmere

4 Colours across The Mere, Ellesmere - Love the sky and the trees contrasting and reflected in The Mere in these few.

5 Colours across The Mere, Ellesmere

6 Colours across The Mere, Ellesmere

Hope you enjoyed the last rays of sun here

-Rob

 

[Pietrach]

Where to start No 1 and 2 lack contrast for my liking. No 1 could be nice if not the burned sky.
I like the most no3, don't ask why Just like it.
4,5,6 - you could try with water line on 2/3 of the picture, instead in the middle. Nice tranquil scenes.

 

[Robert Davies]

Where to start No 1 and 2 lack contrast for my liking. No 1 could be nice if not the burned sky.
I like the most no3, don't ask why Just like it.
4,5,6 - you could try with water line on 2/3 of the picture, instead in the middle. Nice tranquil scenes.

Y'know yesterday, 1 and 2 I liked, today, not so much....

Thanks for the notes on 4, 5, and 6, I'll have another go later in the year.

-Rob

 

[Corsa]

Right then seeing as I know Rob quite well and have been given his say so I have edited the second picture in Photoshop just boosting sharpness,lighten and darken the colours and the contrast,shame i can do other peoples photos but not mine!!!!!!!!!!

Dave

 

[mark greenhill]

Hmm ... don't know whether Hans Christian Anderson would agree - the cottage to me looks more like a 1930's pumphouse Rob! Lovely tranquil river scenes with a hint of autumn in the willows.

 

[Robert Davies]

Thanks to both Mark, for his thoughts, and Dave (corsa) for his re-work - much appreciated chaps.

-Rob