Brighton Speed Trials

[scoobydude]

Hi all
Be gentle as this is my first post on here. Would like to hear what you think of these 3.

 

[Hertsman]

I get the feel for what I think you're trying to achieve, but for some reason, it doesnt quite flow for me.I like the idea though.

I think the border is far to heavy for a start, and I think if you edit the post and give each pic a bit of space it may look better than currently.

 

[scoobydude]

Thanks for the advice ,now edited cheers