Card game

[kryten]

I would be interested in some feed back on these in this section as I do not yet have access to Glamour section.

 

[Geffers]

Can't see why you've bothered with the cards. Number 3 is my fave but the shoes aren't sharp

 

[Claudio17177]

I have to agree with Geoff, def n 3, shoes should be in focus imo, although i think you get away with shallow dof in n2 but the photo doesnt really do it for me sorry. N1 maybe is a little soft or to me it looks like the cards are more in focus that the face and somehow distracting from the model. Also, but this is only personal taste (and hope the model will not argue with me): maybe you like to use some skin softner in pp?Overall I think it's a good attempt

 

[kryten]

Thanks for the feed back. I'll work on that focus and give the skin softening a try.