The first thing I find myself looking at is the watermark. There's really no need for it when seeking critique.
It may have been done to death but it doesn't mean the point is any less valid.The debate about watermarks has been done to death..... (I have no strong feelings either way - my pics sometimes have them, sometimes not)
What was the second thing you noticed, so we can try to give the OP something constructive to work on?
I agree that it does look a bit too desaturated
It may have been done to death but it doesn't mean the point is any less valid.
Thanks for your input though.