Christmas blues

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The one good thing about the Christmas weather is that it's allowed me to practise some photos with my (reluctant) daughter. Welcome any feedback

Thanks as always!

Sarah IG1-2 by Graeme, on Flickr

Sarah IG1--2 by Graeme, on Flickr
 
I prefer the lighting on the first one, but not so much the chopping of the arm. I'm absolutely no expert, and am just giving my opinion as I see it :)
 
Thanks Rick. Agree about the 'arm chopping' too - sadly we were constrained to our small lounge to shoot this but no excuse really!
 
First for me too. Really nice soft lighting. Shame there’s not a bit more separation between the hair and the background.
 
Another for the first here too. There's a blue tinge to the whites of her eyes. Was this intentional?
PS I took a photo at Christmas that had just top part of the hand showing. Family like it but I dislike it because of the chopped off arm ☹️
 
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The whites on the eyes are too blue and I can't get past that- sorry :)

Les
 
Hiya. Love them both. Really liking the overall moody shadowy feel. That said I would remove the green colour grading from the whites of the eyes, as in number one it is very noticeable.

Gaz
 
Michael Batten said:
First for me too. Really nice soft lighting. Shame there’s not a bit more separation between the hair and the background.
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Thanks Michael - yep, have to agree! More practise needed! :)
 
Naka said:
Another for the first here too. There's a blue tinge to the whites of her eyes. Was this intentional?
PS I took a photo at Christmas that had just top part of the hand showing. Family like it but I dislike it because of the chopped off arm ☹️
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Hi Naka - the blue tinge was intentional-ish - I tried to use a colour scheme I have for Instagram but overlooked how it would affect her eyes - lesson learned!
 
cargo said:
Hiya. Love them both. Really liking the overall moody shadowy feel. That said I would remove the green colour grading from the whites of the eyes, as in number one it is very noticeable.

Gaz
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Thank Gaz - messed the eye element up, completely overlooked that! Will definitely remember that for the future!
 
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