The first shot looks a bit underexposed.
I do note from downloading your second file that the darkest parts of the image are not actually quite black. The blown area is not that extensive and it's not like there would be any detail up there in the foggy sky to matter if you had avoided clipping. So all in all I don't think you have really lost anything from the shot as captured. It might need some tweaking for maximum visual appeal.
However, there is a surprising amount of contrast, so I do wonder just how you captured and processed the image and what settings were used. Did you shoot this as a JPEG, or raw, and if JPEG did you have the contrast turned up in the camera? Did you shoot to B&W in camera or perform the conversion later on in software?
I see you already had EC turned down to -0.7, but it appears that you just needed to go a little further since the bulk of the scene is dark, especially the centre and the area upon which you most likely focused. That has no doubt increased the influence of the darker bits, leading to the hint of overexposure you see. If you'd shot at -1 EC instead of -0.7 I think you would have been very close to optimum. If you reduced the contrast a little that might have also provided scope to capture more dynamic range in camera.
Shooting raw would give the maximum flexibility to tweak the shot for ultimate aesthetic appeal and also given you the option to play around with different "colour filters" to try to achieve different effects with what little colour there might be in the scene.