Very typical of a club night shot - its not lit very well (2 frontal lights rarely works well and not at that height either, also the catchlight suggests too small a modifier or its too far away even though the hat makes it harder) and the shadow of her own nose is across her eye
Its rare these nights are good unless you really have someone well used to Portraiture leading the way
That said, I hope it wasn't you leading the night !!!
Dave