coment and crit on my site please

[phildaintith]

alright guys and gals, heres my site that iv been making just as a showcase really for now- once i get paid ill be removing all those adds and my own url.

alistar and a few others pulled me up on my spelling and gramma last time so hopefully its all sorted now haha.

let me know what you think, what needs changing etc, im also struggling coming up with a decent header (if you call it that)

http://www.wix.com/phildaintith/explorethenight

 

[On the Huh]

Better, but still spelling/grammar :

Pretty has 2 t's. i and i'm should be I and I'm.

C'mon dude, I didn't get great CSE results in English in the 70's but FFS.........

 

[AdamPearcey]

First impressions... Slow.
I have a fast internet connection and just loading the home page was bad, then coming to the gallery I thought it froze but it was actually still loading.

Design of the site looks basic, take a jump over to ThemeForest where I got my design for $12.00 (I tweaked mine a little)

 

[pbucks]

Loads fast enough for me.
Some interesting photos on there.

BUT, sort out the grammar/spelling. (Sentences start with capital letters.) It lets the whole site down.

 

[rob_c]

Some excellent photos on the site, really excellent!

The site is very simple - which if you are only using it as a showcase is more than fine. If you are aiming to use it as a business then it really needs some more content to make it more customer orientated

 

[Matt989]

Im using my iphone, I cant view it as its flash!