Couple more portraits for comment

[JJWoody]

Hi Guys
Comments welcome...

One More

Any suggestions for improvement?

 

[purpleclouds]

I really like the first...the eyes stand out a mile!! Both are nice and sharp

 

[Yv]

First one is lovely, the second would be the better one imo IF those stray hairs weren't there.

 

[DeadlySmurf]

Nice shots REALY big eyes as well
in the seccond shot her hair going horizontal is distracting but thats all i would say