Crazy composistion?

[Tim Sainsbury]

Thought this was a duff but looking at it now, theres some things I like.

 

[rh1944]

My observation is crop the top so that the eyes are about one third of the way up the image. If you keep the same aspect ratio when cropping then the right hand edge will go too and this will have the face fill the image more, which might work better. I think the image has potential.

 

[Simmotino]

Works for me.

Awkward composition can often result in the viewer feeling uncomfortable and, with the expression in the eyes of the subject, I think this is one instance where that adds something to the image.

from me!

 

[Tim Sainsbury]

Okey dokey, thanks for the repies.

 

[Dark Star]

Almost works for me...either more nose or less nose would be better (for me at least) and a little less space above the head!

Sharpness of the eye and tones/colour work for me! Different is good sometimes

 

[snoop69]

Hope you dont mind,but i had a quick play & quite like this