My observation is crop the top so that the eyes are about one third of the way up the image. If you keep the same aspect ratio when cropping then the right hand edge will go too and this will have the face fill the image more, which might work better. I think the image has potential.
Awkward composition can often result in the viewer feeling uncomfortable and, with the expression in the eyes of the subject, I think this is one instance where that adds something to the image.
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