Derelict factory.

[Matt Sayle]

C and C

Thanks
Matt

 

[erding]

To me the image looks very flat. With a bit of PP work on the sky you could bring some life there. Some more PP to the trees in the fg would also give it a bit more punch.

 

[sbowler579]

Too much sky and trees for me.

 

[PD_BARBS]

I agree with the trees, the factory just looks lost in them.

 

[Dimitri]

Hi Matt, as others have said, there is a bit too much sky in it which is featureless and doesn`t offer anything to the image. I also think that the bottom row of trees could go, a tighter comp would help to emphasise your subject.

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[gman]

Perhaps a high contrast B&W may work?

 

[Matt Sayle]

To me the image looks very flat. With a bit of PP work on the sky you could bring some life there. Some more PP to the trees in the fg would also give it a bit more punch.

I am crap at paintshop so I cant do that.

Thanks for the C and C.

Too much sky and trees for me.

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Thanks for being honest.

Hi Matt, as others have said, there is a bit too much sky in it which is featureless and doesn`t offer anything to the image. I also think that the bottom row of trees could go, a tighter comp would help to emphasise your subject.

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Ok the compostion needs sorting. This isnt my area of photography BUT I am trying to expand to more areas.

Thank you.

Perhaps a high contrast B&W may work?

Yeah possibly will try later.