Do this work?

[Chaz Photos]

Dose this work a Mediterranean roof top

 

[theonemule]

I think the technical aspects of the photo are nice....the large DoF, the attention to details etc. I think it might work better as a pattern shot... I might crop out the sky and rotate it to make it an abstract sort of pattern. I played with the color some to give it some more contrast between the yellows and oranges....

 

[Chaz Photos]

Yes I did think of this but was not sure if it was still rooftops

 

[theonemule]

Sweetness. I think it does, but I've seen lots of these kinds of roofs....

 

[The Matt]

Compositionally, yes! I like it.
If I had to recommend improvements, I'd say shoot on a sunny day with good light on the roof, some nice blue skies and maybe lose the mountain if there's a viewpoint that would allow it.

Nice work

 

[The23rdman]

I quite like it, Chaz. Would work better if the chimney was straight though.

 

[TwentySixDays]

I quite like it, Chaz. Would work better if the chimney was straight though.

and maybe a tad more contrast and a little smoke?

 

[Forbiddenbiker]

My eyes lead straight across to the chimney as a focal point..

Nothing dramatic but a perfectly executed comp

Yes it does.

 

[marcin]

a bit boring I think

 

[stokecity_m]

a bit boring I think

what you got for sale?

 

[maddop]

I like it. Technically sound with nice contrast sky vs roof.
I would have it as a desktop background but not on my wall.

Just my opinion

 

[ki_user]

I need to ask, did the people living in the house ever get wet, if not, then yes it does work.

But on a serious note I like it, the pattern that the tiles create is nice. Reminds me of one I took.

 

[Eighth Avenue]

Think the composition is bang on, good leading lines. For me the colours look a little flat, possibly consider a b&w conversion?

 

[ArtphotoasiA]

I need to ask, did the people living in the house ever get wet, if not, then yes it does work.

But on a serious note I like it, the pattern that the tiles create is nice. Reminds me of one I took.

Love this one!

 

[ki_user]

Love this one!

The comment or the picture?

 

[ArtphotoasiA]

The picture!

 

[ki_user]

The picture!

Thanks.