Does it work?

[Mojo Jojo]

Again, using my new photoshop (yay!) i think the stars might be a little much but i wanted to create something different. C&C recived with thanks!
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[DarknFuzzy]

I'm not sure on this one tbh.

I find my eye is searching for a focal point, is it the stars on the background, the flowers, the face etc. I am no expert however and different people will like different things.

Hope this helps you.

 

[percymon]

I'm not sure on this one tbh.

I find my eye is searching for a focal point, is it the stars on the background, the flowers, the face etc. I am no expert however and different people will like different things.

Hope this helps you.

Exactly my thoughts from an untrained eye - i think the overexposure/blown highlights on the lower face and upper arms doesn't help in this respect either. You might be able to damp these down a bit in p'shop ?