I'm afraid the first looks very oversharpened in my opinion and it ruins the shot.
I like the second, I can see what you were going for there. It's a shame about the bridge in the background, its a tad distracting but you can't pick your settings in these situations!
Not cutting off the tail in the edge of the frame would have improved this one too.
Its hard shooting these types of pics, I have never managed to come up with any I have been happy with. Nice effort.