Im not sure that my edit is actually 'better' (though I did crop to the left just a little, lol!)
I used the shadow/highlight tool to lift the subject a little morre ... not sure now, perhaps a little less might have been better.
Beautiful model (looks a bit like my sis)
Roger if you prefer I can always remove
Puz she was actually looking at me instead of the lens lol and I agree about the composition...
Why do so so many people never consider rotating the camera to portrait orientation when taking portraits?
99% of the shots were landscape, even though its pretty obvious the subject is portraits! Lost a lot of detail, and lots of white walls gained