Emma and Paul - 1st Dance - 2nd Shooting

[The_Bulb]

I assisted Simon Harding yesterday at the wedding of Emma and Paul. Got to have a further play and continued my experimentation with OCF at the first dance as being the second the pressure was off!!!! After picking Simon Revill's brain in the week about a new bracket to hold my flash I am quite pleased with the results.

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As always thanks for looking and any C&C however harsh most welcome as this is very much a learning curve!

 

[shadow82]

I do like the last one and no I dont think its dark like that a lot.

 

[Matt989]

Really like these, number 3 id clone out the flash (and its stand) but apart from that spot on!

 

[J4MIE_P]

Those images look great, little dark on the last couple for myself though.

Just wondering how do you manage to get such effective stars from your flash? I've tried narrower apertures to achieve larger stars but I still end up with just a flash of light