I really like the first one, but the second one doesn't do so much for me. The eye contact is both hilarious and really sweet in the first! If I had a suggestion it'd be to darken the right hand side of the table... the lighting is a tiny bit distracting - but that's practically irrelevant. Love the shot!
EDIT: In fact, I've changed my mind - even the light on the table works!
the first one is really special ... ... a crisp sharp image with a story to tell making it quite captivating ...
The second lacks the clarity and sharpness especially in the eyes imhgo but is a really good composition ... :shrug:
First one for me too, just every thing is right about it!