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Hi all, I know it's been a while since we did this shoot, but finally I've found time to post some of my shots up here on TP. You may have already seen these on my Flickr photostream or my Facebook photopage

1. Anne

Anna aka Goldy Loxx with Red Singer Nine Le Mans - Colne Valley Railway - 111016 - Steven Gray - IMG_8799 by stevipedia, on Flickr

2. Anne

Anna aka Goldy Loxx with Blue Wolseley 1500 - Colne Valley Railway - 111016 - Steven Gray - IMG_8734 by stevipedia, on Flickr

3. Anne

Portrait - Anna aka Goldy Loxx - Colne Valley Railway - 111016 - Steven Gray - IMG_8683 by stevipedia, on Flickr

4. Leanne

Portrait - Leanne aka Doll Leanne - Colne Valley Railway - 111016 - Steven Gray - IMG_8875 by stevipedia, on Flickr

5. Leanne

Portrait - Leanne aka Doll Leanne - Colne Valley Railway - 111016 - Steven Gray - IMG_8535 by stevipedia, on Flickr

6. Leanne

Portrait - Leanne aka Doll Leanne - Colne Valley Railway - 111016 - Steven Gray - IMG_8880 by stevipedia, on Flickr

Flickr http://www.flickr.com/photos/stevipedia/sets/72157627796293557
Facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/Steven-R-Gray-Photography/126819607396535

Kind regards

Steve
 
 
1. Attention drawn between car and model making it hard to identify main subject. But you have managed to capture Anne with her eyes opened, I really struggled with that due to her long false lashes.

2. Too under-exposed for me and again car seems to be stealing focus.

3. Really really like this one, great pose and processing. Would possibly straighten up (so rear wooden beams are running vertical) and clone out the top left lamp.

4. Nice B&W conversion, model pops from background.

6. Pose looks slightly awkward (maybe trying to get the leg tattoo in shot). POssibly small exposure adjustments around her head to separate her hair from dark background.

7. Nice pose/composition. Cloning out the seat rips/holes near her head/hand would benefit the image.

8. My second favourite out of the set, looks like its straight out of a stylish clothes catalogue.

9. Prefer the colour version (which has loads of compliment colours, browns, reds etc). I'd be very tempted to crop the image much tighter framing just her upper body, arm and head.

Just my C&C opinions and I don't have a clue what I'm doing most of the time anyway. :p Nice set overall though. (y)
 
Thanks for the C&C Andy. I'll attempt to redo some of these at a later date taking on board you comments

Kind regards

Steve
 
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