Few close ups from my collection
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Hi and welcome to TP. My first comment really is if you number your shots it is far easier for people to comment one.
Just a couple of thoughts. The butterfly is out of focus, which is a shame as it's a nice composition. Try and focus on the head and the rest tends to fall into place.
The spiders web is a nice idea, and the web has come out well. The spider is blown, so you would have benefitted from dropping the exposure a little.
The berries would have benefitted from it all being in focus. The depth of field needs to be changed to achieve that. The larger the F number, then the more you will get in focus.
Hope that helps. Stick at it and you will see improvements.
Just a couple of thoughts. The butterfly is out of focus, which is a shame as it's a nice composition. Try and focus on the head and the rest tends to fall into place.
The spiders web is a nice idea, and the web has come out well. The spider is blown, so you would have benefitted from dropping the exposure a little.
The berries would have benefitted from it all being in focus. The depth of field needs to be changed to achieve that. The larger the F number, then the more you will get in focus.
Hope that helps. Stick at it and you will see improvements.
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Thanks for the comments, I'm not sure the butterfly is actually out of focus, it's just not that sharp because I'm only using a Bridge Camera.
Yeah I knew the spider was over blown, took it on the first day with my new came so was only taken in auto mode.
And incase you hadn't noticed I'm fairly new to photography
Yeah I knew the spider was over blown, took it on the first day with my new came so was only taken in auto mode.
And incase you hadn't noticed I'm fairly new to photography
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Welcome to TP, some good attempts and #7 is the best I think.