Fireworks over Chatsworth house

[J13ERO]

Not sure this is the right section but here goes, these are a couple of my first attempts at shooting fireworks at a display over chatsworth at the weekend, any help or critique would be muchly appreciated.

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[wooders]

No expert but they are lacking something ???? and maybe out of focus to my eyes
There is a firework thread here that might offer better feedback - http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/threads/2014-fireworks-thread.565969/

 

[J13ERO]

No expert but they are lacking something ???? and maybe out of focus to my eyes
There is a firework thread here that might offer better feedback - http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/threads/2014-fireworks-thread.565969/

Thanks for the feedback, I actually found the firework thread after I posted these here! Interestingly you're the first person that's seen them to say they're out of focus?!

 

[wooders]

its the 2nd pic that looks slightly out but maybe just my eyes .( I wasn't nit picking )

ps ......just showed the other half and she said im being to fussy and she liked it !

 

[J13ERO]

its the 2nd pic that looks slightly out but maybe just my eyes .( I wasn't nit picking )

ps ......just showed the other half and she said im being to fussy and she liked it !

Ahh fair enough haha I don't mind nit picking I like the pointers so I can improve!