First attempts at smoke

[woolfe]

Well my wife was kind enough to buy me a flash gun today so had to give it a run out. Decided to try some somke pictures. I hope you like them

Thanks for looking C & C always welcome how else will I improve?


Smoke in red by MRW Photography2011, on Flickr


Smoke art by MRW Photography2011, on Flickr

 

[Sean17]

A great start, personally I feel leaving the incense stick out would make it a better picture.

 

[ivandobski]

I had a go at smoke the other day - they looked nowt like these unfortunately!

I'd agree with leaving the incense out and I'd also say that the 2nd looks overworked. 1st is really nice though.

 

[mission1968]

I realy like the first 1 ivandobski am going to have to try 1 with a white background

 

[funkybus]

loving the 2nd one best looks great

 

[shooter560]

2nd one for me, actually like the stick in the shot, in my eyes better than just a trail of smoke across the screen

 

[Graham00]

#2 on the black works great and would be for #1 as well i think

 

[Scotty]

I Like #2, cant decide if it would be better with or without the incense sticl. Good work.

 

[woolfe]

Thanks for all your coments they have encouraged me to do more........Oh no you say lol

 

[AlphaGirl]

i love the red version! i agree with previous posts that the actual incense stick could be cloned out and the photo re cropped a little. but great work!

this is on my list of things to try out!

AG