For a first attempt at a portrait its very good. As EosD has said the catchlights in the eyes are a must and you have managed to cpature the subject without any harsh shadows on her face.
With it being a upclose and intermate portrait I would have had the girl look into the camera to make the relationship between her and the camera a little stronger.
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