First foray into street.

[Robert Eva]

Brighouse 1940's weekend. by Robert Eva, on Flickr

 

[Ste_S]

I like it, but for me there's probably a bit too much distraction in the top of the frame ? How do you feel about a tighter crop on it like below ? May just come down to personal taste I guess

 

[Graham]

Well spotted

 

[VirtualAdept]

I like it, but for me there's probably a bit too much distraction in the top of the frame ? How do you feel about a tighter crop on it like below ? May just come down to personal taste I guess

View attachment 127899

I think I disagree with you good sir... While I can see what you're saying about the top being a bit distracting, I think the full impact is lost is you don't have the vintage-y ladies in their entirety.

 

[Deleted member 34016]

I too prefer the original- the lady on the mobility scooters expression is top notch - tells a story just like good street photography should

Les

 

[juggler]

It's great, but I do wonder whether a photo which included the faces of the women in spots would be better - even if it didn't include the scooter & its occupant.