First post in this area, C&C welcome

[MarkEvan]

Took this shot of the brother and sister inlaw a while back, I quite like it though know that there are several areas that are blown out.

All critique welcome.


Thanx for looking

Mark

 

[Betty]

Blown out areas aside, personally it looks posed. It could well have been for all I know, but a candid would be better

Plus you cant really see her face, and the bit you can see is in shadow.

Ill crawl back into my hole now

 

[MarkEvan]

No need to crawl back into a hole, I asked for critique so I gotta be able to take it when it comes.


It is posed to a degree, that is I told them to act natural while I take a few shots, not easy to act natural while someones there with a camera I guess .


Advice taken on the shadow in her face, it was bright sunshine overhead and the shadows were a little inevitable (couldn`t use fill flash), but point taken and definetly something to keep in mind next time were out.


Thanx Betty for the honesty


Mark