Flyer feedback

[rgrebby]

Just hoping to get some feedback on some new A5 flyers.

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[Flash In The Pan]

Looking good My only slight criticism is "Portraits at home or in a studio" doesn't scan right to me, I feel the "a" (and possibly the "in" as well) is superfluous and the green font isn't to my taste, but it stands out, as it should, so :shrug:

 

[rgrebby]

hmm your right, cant think how to word it.

 

[bigbigblue]

rgrebby,
Not sure about the boxes at the bottom - the font isn't very stylish and clashes with the lovely photographs. I'm also not sure about the powder blue colour, or the roll of negative film in the background (it's possible some of your younger potential wedding clients might never have seen film !).

Just my opinion.

Edit : Meant to say the signature is fine - it's the other font I'm not sure about.

 

[Flash In The Pan]

Well, looking at the images above the text, the fact that you do both studio and location/home shoots is obvious, so how about something like.....


Lifestyle and Studio Portraiture

Lifestyle and Studio Portraits

Portrait Specialist

Lifestyle Portraiture

Lifestyle Portait Specialist