flying with clouds+ BLACK TO WHITE SIMPLE VERSION
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I like it. Maybe the composition is a little muddy as the kite is overlapping the cloud but overall I think it works. Any other photos or crops of the same sort? I would also say the kite itself looks a tad underexposed. Maybe bring out some of the detail.
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To be honest, there's no real emotion, interest or connection in this image for me, it's more of a snap really...
There is a great series of articles here: http://www.outdoorsphotography.co.uk/composition-1-the-kiss-technique/ by a chap called Ian Bramham specifically on composition. They're well worth a read! Hope they help
There is a great series of articles here: http://www.outdoorsphotography.co.uk/composition-1-the-kiss-technique/ by a chap called Ian Bramham specifically on composition. They're well worth a read! Hope they help
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To be honest, there's no real emotion, interest or connection in this image for me, it's more of a snap really...
There is a great series of articles here: http://www.outdoorsphotography.co.uk/composition-1-the-kiss-technique/ by a chap called Ian Bramham specifically on composition. They're well worth a read! Hope they help
you are sooooooooooooooo serious...you can not be serious
joking old chap...perhaps if you knew the guy on the other end of the kite had just landed on his posterior on a jagged rock...there was some emotion there
cheers
geof
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i have a few more without mud...but not so abstract and unemotive as this one
just some fun folks...nothing too serious...i wish
i am needing to do some more serious shots..though..seriously...i seem to be just snapping around just now
cheers
geof
ps that is a good site on outdoor photography..cheers
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Did you do the black and white conversion after looking through the articles? Either way - I really like the conversion - I'm assuming it was mainly based around a red software filter.
Good work!
I hope the guy attached to the rocks is OK and that you find your motivation soon - it's a beautiful part of the world that you live in.
James
Did you do the black and white conversion after looking through the articles? Either way - I really like the conversion - I'm assuming it was mainly based around a red software filter.
Good work!
I hope the guy attached to the rocks is OK and that you find your motivation soon - it's a beautiful part of the world that you live in.
James
Hi,
At first when reading the thread, I found myself agreeing with everyone else, but then I went back to staring at the images......
I really like the B&W version.. I am not entirely sure why.. I think the cloud has some nice varying tones and the sky has a subtle gradient to it as well.
I guess the only criticism I would have is that the composition would be abit stronger with some sky between the cloud and the kite..
Nice shot anyway..
At first when reading the thread, I found myself agreeing with everyone else, but then I went back to staring at the images......
I really like the B&W version.. I am not entirely sure why..
I think the cloud has some nice varying tones and the sky has a subtle gradient to it as well.I guess the only criticism I would have is that the composition would be abit stronger with some sky between the cloud and the kite..
Nice shot anyway..