Focus Model in Blue

[Mart61]

This lass was a little off the wall but I think she carried it off ok:

Your thoughts?

 

[Phil Wood]

Great eye contact.Not too keen on the left arm position I think it would be better with the hand raised. Her head is well posed though.

 

[Mart61]

I think I may recrop to lose the arm. Looks a bit like a chicken leg...

 

[Phil Wood]

Good idea let us see what you come up with

 

[Diego Garcia]

Great colour and Blade Runner eque eye make up.

 

[radiantvision]

Perspective and pose killed this photo; "Popeye" arm didn't helped. Head looks too small, breast is too big - proportions are lost completely...

 

[DizMatt]

like the lighting and tone a lot
her left arm does look odd though..maybe she's just REALLY strong or pulls pints left handed all day 24.-7

 

[Mart61]

I'm gonna check the rest of my shots of this model. See if I can find a nicer shot to work with.

Thanks for the input guys. These few shots I've posted are my very first attempt at shooting models and I have a great deal to learn, not helped by the fact that my immediate family run a mile if I go near them with a camera...