Friend's hen night - first group shot

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other than the road sign and the passing car, how else could i have improved this.

Adjusted brightness, contrast and white balance, sharpened and cropped.

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un-cropped version

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Taking the telegraph pole out of the top of the girl's head will help. :)
 
it needs serious cropping!
(top and bottom)
 
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PMSL
 
"He might not have been talking about post processing "

thats what made me laugh
 
tighter crop for sure.
could do with increasing the exposure.
composition is quite good (I like the car in the photo and poses are not bad apart from the floating head of the girl and the telegraph pole, great facial expressions though!)

Saying that I think the bride to be should have been in the centre and people positioned around her.

I think it is pretty good all round

AND pmsl at the 'Had a little play' comments... I LOLed
 
What an awesome thread, I'm in bits sat here ROFL!!

Seriously though... You were too far away from the subjects, if you wanted the limo in the pic u should have positioned them at teh side of the car of bonnet?
 
i agree with above, your a little far away, we have 2/3rds of the pic wasted with trees and road. get the girls infront of the car and around the bonnet and would have been much closer
 
Move bout 5 yards down the road to get rid of the fence and the telegraph pole
 
Will B said:
How do, had a little play, hope you dont mind.. Cheers

Willem

Hee hee. :D

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PerfectSpeed said:
He might not have been talking about post processing :LOL:
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LOL, I thought the same too. I nearly choked on my Chupa Chups lolly when I read it. :LOL:

Seriously though, I think it is a good quality photo and can appreciate that it needs a little thought about composition, but agree that the ladies would look good in front of the side of the car, with the bride to be in the middle and the girls kind of placed evenly at each side. A few shots could have been taken with that scene in mind. :)
 
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