Critique Girl in the Woods

[Fatheadedlizard]

Managed to drag the kids for a walk along the canal for a picnic(with the intention of scouting some locations) they only gave me about 3 minutes but managed to grab this which I quite like

 

[Les McLean]

I do like this, a bit different, but has impact. Personally I would crop a tad from the right (I never like the subject bang in the middle of the frame), and it's a pity the foliage is partially covering her right eye.

Regardless, this is innovative, and appealing.

 

[Fatheadedlizard]

Thanks lee I have done another cropped and it does look better and yes the bit covering her eye is annoying. Thanks for commenting

 

[juggler]

Interesting pic. I prefer the moodiness of the first, and the skin tones have gone a bit wangy in the second variant.