Critique Grosmont NYMR

[jpgreenwood]

One of the first shots I ever took with my Nikon D3200. Not even sure what setting I was on but luckily panned just right (IMHO). The train was literally crawling pace. Its had a bit of a boost in colour.
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[lfc1892]

I think it's too close in and needs to show more of the train, preferably not straight on too. The bright bit on the right distracts too.
Try to get more even light too as the shadows dint help