Gun Turret

[b1gdunc]

This is a gun turret from the war at a local place near me. I used colour pop effects to make the graffiti stand out.

Gun turret by duncan jobson, on Flickr

 

[Byker28i]

Not sure about the colour pop and I think the clouds/sky needs a little more depth, definition, darkness? However I like the composition, I think that's got real potential.

 

[b1gdunc]

Not sure about the colour pop and I think the clouds/sky needs a little more depth, definition, darkness? However I like the composition, I think that's got real potential.

The colour pop was apart of a photography course I'm currently doing, so it had to be. I see what you mean about the clouds. Maybe if they was more like this photo?

Typical British weather by duncan jobson, on Flickr

 

[Byker28i]

Just a bit more darkness to the clouds to add definition in the first. Perhaps a little too much in the second as you've lost detail in the posts/pipe, although with the small child there it could be seen as making a statement of the pollution of beaches (if thats a sewer pipe)

 

[green ant]

Love them both! really cool.