Personally, I don't think it's a keeper.
Please take the following as constructive critisism, I'm not trying to be overly nasty, but this is my honest opinion.
The top one is oversaturated, both are overexposed, too soft, and the composition just doesn't work. I'd much rather see a face on smiling shot than his back and slumped shoulders.
Looks like he's had enough of you and is off to find another home
**Insight** If you were going for that as a comedy shot, then it's brilliant
I've just given it a small tweek of brightness and contrast.....stops me squinting. Hope you didn't mind.
Bob
image is a tad soft and over exposed. some of the edits look better