Critique Josh

[cargo]

A few images/snaps that were taken at My Daughters 18th Birthday family get together round at our house. Josh was about 7 months old at the time and seemed to get the attention of most.
People are not easy to take photos of in regular homes. Or is it just me ?

Anyways thoughts comments ways to improve on any aspect. Posing, lighting, post work are all welcome.
I just wanna take nice photos as easily as possible not wanting to do this for work at all.

Gaz

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[martin.pring]

Great attempts, keep it up.

1.- Great

2.- The older fellows face is out of focus

3.- just looks to me like the chap top left would prefer to be elsewhere

 

[cargo]

Cheers Martin. Do agree with your feedback. I really do love the first image
Number 2 I do like i'm not sure what f stop I would need at that distance to get both in focus .This was taken with ambient light in a small area Iso 2000 f4.5 1/50th.
Yes was a shame about "Mathew" on the left but I liked the scene otherwise.

Many thanks for stopping by.

Gaz