Whenever you pose someone, remember that the body part closest to the camera is distorted and if the distortion isn't attractive it will detract from the image, as has happened here. When the image first opens up the hands aren't in it and it's a pretty good image (shiny nose excepted), but as soon as you move down and see the whole image the hands spoil it considerably and take you from a pretty good image to a pretty average image.
With the shiny nose, if the image looks flat without it, that's your PP and no amount of shiny nose will rescue that for you as the light spots become what your eye is drawn to.
So take care with the placement of limbs in relation to your lens. Oh, and one of the skills in photography is noticing mistakes like these so the moment you have a mix of perspectives on an image, that tells you that there are mistakes that you need to listen to and take on. A great image is a great image to near enough everyone.
My advice - love your fans, listen to your critics!