Kirby Lonsdale Victorian Day

[gibbo]

Ok here goes my first photos.
Be honest and c&c is welcome Thankyou.
(I hope this works)

My second photo
[img]http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/1182/KirbyLady.jpg

Third

Forth

Please let me know what you think
Thankyou

 

[moomike]

Happy you decided not just to show them to your family
Expressions & compositions are excellent mate, all very nicely caught

I do think that all except the 2nd could do with a very slight levels or shadows/highlights tweak to lighten them up a bit though as they're looking a tad dark. Possibly a bit of a sharpen too but the foundations are perfectly good images that could be spot on with a bit of post processing.
I'd be happy with them, very nicely done

 

[Deleted member 3428]

Nice composures, only a little fill flash might have improved the shadows and the only CC I can think of, very nice natural light shots.

 

[gibbo]

Thanx moomike, Im a bit chuffed at that Thanx I`ll have a go at the second one again.
Thanx Ajophotog, I dont have a flash at the moment, I have never had any good results from using flash in the past usually too light or look unnatural (Flat).
(thanx again my nerves settling down a bit now)

 

[gibbo]

How is this moomike

 

[moomike]

I much prefer that one mate, the skin tones seem a lot more even & balanced & not too red
Think the same treatment for the others would work perfectly too
I sat with that woman & her husband in the pub for a pint but never got one photo of her, doh!!

 

[gibbo]

I much prefer that one mate, the skin tones seem a lot more even & balanced & not too red
Think the same treatment for the others would work perfectly too
I sat with that woman & her husband in the pub for a pint but never got one photo of her, doh!!

Thanx moomike

well who would think of taking photos while your drinking well you would spill it hahahaha

 

[moomike]

 

[v_mancunian]

Very nice set. Thx for sharing. ( prefer the original no2 btw.)