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I'm unsure about this, I've looked at it for a while so it is certainly engaging. I would definitely loose the bright patches at the bottom, I guess the top part is just a bit too "organic" for me.
 
I think I agree with Chris partly; I'd crop off the bottom two lines but I really like the "organic" top section as the variation makes the image flow top to bottom. I think it's really engaging.
 
This looks somewhat 'software generated' to me, though that's possibly because I've seen your other work and I'm imagining it. There's nothing wrong with that, but my eyes find wispy bits between the lines that don't have the soft smoothness of of OOF or ICM.
 
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