Very sorry, but I don't like this photo.
The face and rocks are soft, causing a massive detraction from the photo, and I feel the model doesn't look.. gothic enough for the kind of settings and scenario that I think you were going for.
It has potential, but I think you need to re-think the pose and nail that focus.
Sorry for the negative criticism, I don't like giving it and I'm sure you don't like receiving it!