' a great TL film, great choice of shots and overall good flow. The only thing I would comment on is the adding in post of movement. Although this is a great tool to add continuous movement to a stationary shot it needs to be done with care. Going out on a limb I'm guessing you added this in Prem Pro or Final. This is one way of doing it, the other is to use After Effects which gives you much more control over the movement and is by far a much better way to create a TL sequence than an editing platform. For example, at 2.40 the added camera movement from left to right changes speed and the zooms out very erratically.
Using AE you can add easy ease key frames that make this movement much more fluid, each sequence created in AE can then be dynamically linked to Final or Prem pro negating the need to render out the TL and then import it to you timeline in the editing software. Any changes made to the TL in AE auto updates once the AE project has been linked so you can play around with the camera movement to see what works best.
Really enjoyed watching it and fully apprieciate the time it must have took to film and put together in post