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I like the idea but I'd place her a little more left in the frame to balance it better. Looks like tricky lighting too!
 
I like the idea but I'd place her a little more left in the frame to balance it better. Looks like tricky lighting too!

yes, two divisions of seats would help
the pose is iconic and the lighting super/natural
the place to get the redemption is at the foot of the cross, biblically
dont mind me
cheers
geof
 
I did have a crop of just the two rows of seats, but it took out the great colours on the left that I felt balanced the image quite well - now it's been pointed out it does suit a more 3:2 composition.

Thanks!
 
I'm not convinced its a LHS crop that is required, I'd say this would be a better image should the person be placed less close the the RHS, can it be cropped that way?
 
Unfortunately not, the frame ends as is on the first crop...
 
Well I like it, lighting is good and composition is dramatic, I'd be happy with it.:)
 
I love the idea, and for me the composition is fantastic. I'm not 100% sure about the lighting on her, though I like it on the benches
 
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