No 2 is good - I like the light on her face. There's a weird thing sticking out of the top of her head, though. I'm not sure you've got the focus bang on either - but its tricky to tell because of the soft filter you used. You've also reflected light off the box she's sitting on - which is distracting.
No 1 is a shocker. The lighting is just wrong. I don't know where to begin. So I won't, save to say you do your model no favours at all with that shot.