My first ever studio shoot.

[Gary.D]

Heres a few examples of my first ever studio shoot
I need C+C please as it was my first im sure there is alot wrong with them
Although the lack of sharpness seems to be from resizing.
Thanks very much
Gary

#1

#2

#3

Thanks for looking
Gary

 

[steveathome]

Was this your own studio set-up or in a pro studio.
If you don't mind me asking what was your lighting set-up?
To me the subject is looking a little on the dark side, but great effort if your first shoot.
ps. Pretty subject too

 

[Betty]

I agree with steveathome, subject is a bit dark, they all seem a little soft to me as well.

 

[Gary.D]

It was in a pro studio. She may be dark because I changed the contrast to get some detail in her face and make the clothes darker.
Cheers for your comments
Gary

 

[ianm79]

plain white background yuk - 1st one is a nice pose

 

[Gary.D]

plain white background yuk - 1st one is a nice pose

what backgrounds do you like using Ian?
Gary

 

[lukewoodford]

They are not bad at all for your first go, in the second two though she looks like shes really struggling to smile, probably tired of it, try and make her laugh or something. #2 is a bit squashed in the frame aswell.

 

[steveathome]

Hope you don't mind.

 

[pcp]

Hope you don't mind this too

 

[mhuk]

I'm no expert but there's seems to be a lot of facial shadows for a high key shot (given the white background). If you're happy with the lighting on her face I'd have gone for a coloured background of some kind.

There a few shots of different high key images, white bg, grey bg etc. here that show it better than I'm saying it

 

[annao]

Hi Gary

She looks a little "cut out" to me , particulary with her black top against the white background.

However, i have to say her posture looks nice and relaxed, especially in number 3.

 

[Gary.D]

Ok cheers for the comments guys, all taken on board
Gary