My Kids
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moomike
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Honest feedback coming up then 
1st - you seem to have missed focus on his eyes unfortunately which has resulted in the image looking too soft imo.
2nd. Nice composition but the brightness of the flash has washed out a bit too much of the detail for me.
3rd. Love it, expression & family atmosphere is spot on imo - the image could definitely do with some post processing though to bring out the detail & work more with the B&W (I would work in RGB rather than Grayscale if I were you as it opens up more options in processing).
As you have your edit box ticked I have had a bit of a play (if you want the images removed, just give me a shout via PM & I'll sort it for you) Just levels, brightness & contrast & a bit of a sharpen
4th shots is nicely captured but seems a little soft - think focus may have locked onto the jumper rather than her eyes due to lack of light - think that this image could be saved with a bit of selective sharpening though & you've once again captured a great expression
5th. Excellent shot & my favourite of the set - I have slightly altered the composition though to remove the empty space to the left of the frame & give a bit more direction to the composition. You should always allow some space for the subject to "move into" so as the image doesn't feel cramped & the pointing hand adds a great feeling of space. Very nicely done
Very promising start & I look forward to more
1st - you seem to have missed focus on his eyes unfortunately which has resulted in the image looking too soft imo.
2nd. Nice composition but the brightness of the flash has washed out a bit too much of the detail for me.
3rd. Love it, expression & family atmosphere is spot on imo - the image could definitely do with some post processing though to bring out the detail & work more with the B&W (I would work in RGB rather than Grayscale if I were you as it opens up more options in processing).
As you have your edit box ticked I have had a bit of a play (if you want the images removed, just give me a shout via PM & I'll sort it for you
) Just levels, brightness & contrast & a bit of a sharpen
4th shots is nicely captured but seems a little soft - think focus may have locked onto the jumper rather than her eyes due to lack of light - think that this image could be saved with a bit of selective sharpening though & you've once again captured a great expression
5th. Excellent shot & my favourite of the set - I have slightly altered the composition though to remove the empty space to the left of the frame & give a bit more direction to the composition. You should always allow some space for the subject to "move into" so as the image doesn't feel cramped & the pointing hand adds a great feeling of space. Very nicely done
Very promising start & I look forward to more
Thanks,
I dont mind anyone playing with the photos as I am too scared to do so at the moment.
Have had the camera for three weeks now and am just about getting the hang of it.
Feel free to have a play and make the best of them.
Cheers for the comments and help.
I dont mind anyone playing with the photos as I am too scared to do so at the moment.
Have had the camera for three weeks now and am just about getting the hang of it.
Feel free to have a play and make the best of them.
Cheers for the comments and help.