Home:
Nice simple homepage here. Nothing majorly wrong but could probably do with a bit of jazzing up. I'm not madly keen on the font used in the logo, but if that's what you want to go with it might be worth seeing if you could implement the same font throughout the site. Compared with the logo the menu text seems a bit bland.
The logo will probably change futher down the line but atm i like it so going to leave it, and yes i do agree with the rest of the writting i need to look into fonts that dont look boring but are still easily read.
I love the photo in the centre of the page and it's extremely striking, although the black background does slightly bleed into the darker areas of the image itself. My only suggestion for the photo itself would be a bit of PHP image rotation to keep it looking fresh every time you visit.
yeh i need to do that at some point to have it scrolling, i like they way it does slightly blend in with the back ground, i need to find some similar pictures as i know it sounds weird but i dont want it to jump out when you first go on to it if that makes sense,
Last point would be the slightly wasted space on the edges of the frame. There's a lot of black there and it feels a bit overpowering, what with everything being in the middle.
Yeh again i agree but i dont know what i can do to cure this.
Gallery:
I love the way the menu and the logo stay in
exactly the same place when I click on the Gallery. I had feared everything would move around so that's great to see.
Not so keen on the way all the gallery thumbnails are aligned to the left, but that's an easy thing to sort. I do really like the two thumbnails for the Portraits and Motoring, but I'm getting a blank white square for Places. And while I can see the Miscellaneous thumbnail, I'd prefer that to be the same size as the other three.
places is a blank sqaure atm as i have no suitable picture (i want to find a road/street with 'place' in the name and get that. but i i am going to create something so that it scrolls through a few images like the main screen will at some point.)
where would you prefer the thumbnails to be? as i can put them to the right and im sure below.
And again, I'd really like to see a smarter font introduced for the text. Even if that means making buttons so you can incorporate the font used in the logo.
Galleries:
Ah. Now we've got a light movement of the logo and the menu to the left. Only a small one but as it's white on black it's immediately noticeable.
tbh i had never noticed that so thanks for pointing it out
The gallery is nicely implemented but I've got a couple of issues with how Simpleviewer works. On my 'regular' sized browser window the first image is cut off and I'd need to scroll down in order to see it. But when I scroll my mouse wheel I start to scroll through the various thumbnails. It's not your fault but it is bloody annoying.
Yeh i hate the fact it scrolls like that aswell 
but i dont think that can be solved simply 
There's another little problem here, although not a major one, in that there's no real 'easy' way to get back to the four galleries. Of course I can click on 'Galleries' at the top, but I'd like a way to be able to jump in-between the four at will. Perhaps a sub-menu under the main one?
will see how possible that is
About:
Again we've got a slight shift in the alignment of the logo and the menu, but this time it's somewhere in-between the other two.
will have a look into this issue
I've got an issue with your wording on this page. You say:
But this isn't the first page your visitors will come to. I'd rework that sentence and drop the 'Firstly' bit.
And all of the second paragraph has no place on a portfolio site. Don't tell people you are learning, don't sell yourself short and don't give your potential customers more information that they really need to know.
Also forget about the equipment as it's of no interest to potential customers and a nice advert to potential thieves. And don't include links to other websites as all you're doing is encouraging people to leave yours.
i may get rid of the whole page or find something else to put on there
Contact:
Alignment of the logo and menu is back to that of the homepage, so a decision needs to be made about where it's going to sit on
all of them.
will all be the same as home page
No major issues here, but a couple of moans. If you are going to forgo a Contact Form and force people into opening their own email client, at least give them a hyperlinked mailto address to work with. I really don't appreciate having to be copy and paste your email address. Secondly, keep facebook as far away from your website as you possibly can. You do not want potential customers visiting your page and possibly seeing something about you that they really don't want to.
yeh my mate said the same about facebook, will take the link down or start up a new facebook for my photography specifically. and yeh i decided not to hyperlink the site as in my opwn experiences it opened outlook which most people dont have set up (which always annoyed me when i was doing it but i will get it to hyperlink
Overall:
A fine effort in spite of a few little mistakes here and there and certainly a sound basis from which to work from. The galleries need a little more work and a bit more content but the photography itself is very nice and a credit to your quite professional-looking website.
