My Website - Help me build by Critique

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Hi Guys,

I am currently in the process of building a website, bit stuck for ideas.

Im interested in peoples views good or bad and will take this all on board and hopefully end up with a nice looking site.

I would like it to be very Simple and easy to navigate. Plain and Contemporary.

Heres the Site: www.oxonphotography.co.uk

Thanks in advance.

Matt
 
You are right about it being plain.....

Are we supposed to crit the rest of the site none of the links lead to anything?
 
You are right about it being plain.....

Are we supposed to crit the rest of the site none of the links lead to anything?

READ the original Post "I am currently in the process of building a website, bit stuck for ideas"
 
Hi Matt,

You have the plain and contemporary sorted, I like it.

The only thing I would suggest at the moment would be to make your name stand out more/be more defined - This is what lets it down as it stands in my opinion.

I think you are on the right track though and what you have so far looks good to me, come back when you have added a bit more but as it stands - all good
 
first page is too deep/long. I have 1280x800 laptop screen, no extra toolbars on browser, but your tag line has dropped off bottom of screen and you have to scroll down to see it (not bothered about copyright info)...imo whole first page needs to be totally visible to average screen, subsequent pages can be scrollable if they really need to be.
 
Thanks Guys. I'll get that done tomorrow afternoon. Be interested to hear your thoughts when it's updated.

Really appreciate your feedback.

Matt
 
It was the sarcastic Manner of which it was done.

Typical response from a youngster of today, cannot stand criticism of any form.

If my answer reads as sarcastic to you, you have been educated wrongly about sarcasm.

You asked for critique in your headline...I gave it, then I asked another question, that is all.
 
tiler65 said:
Typical response from a youngster of today, cannot stand criticism of any form.

If my answer reads as sarcastic to you, you have been educated wrongly about sarcasm.

You asked for critique in your headline...I gave it, then I asked another question, that is all.

I don't mind constructive criticism.

The other Guys who commented have been helpful, your comment was sarcastic and unhelpful.

If you had of read the First post fully you would have seen it was only partially built.

Unfortunately you like few others on here of recent like to jump in and try to upset people, then when you get a reaction you play the victim.

You may need to look up what constructive criticism actually is.
 
I did read the first post entirely, that is why I asked another question.

By asking another question, I am being constructive.

This is sarcasm; 'Nice to see you have many replies on this thread' Do you see the difference between sarcasm and critique?
 
I did read the first post entirely, that is why I asked another question.

By asking another question, I am being constructive.

This is sarcasm; 'Nice to see you have many replies on this thread' Do you see the difference between sarcasm and critique?

Tom you are getting a bit annoying now. This post is for Help with my website, not you trying to convince yourself that your intial post was not sarcastic.

Prefer it if you dont post on my threads in the future.
 
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You are being childish because you got it wrong about my post.
 
tiler65 said:
You are being childish because you got it wrong about my post.

Tom if it makes you feel better about yourself and lightens up your exciting life that's fine.

You have insulted me twice Tom
Childish? Poorly Educated?

You obviously see yourself as a superior.

Please stop being a argumentative pest. :)
 
Where did I write you were poorly educated?.....I think you need to read my posts again. You are the one name calling.
 
tiler65 said:
Where did I write you were poorly educated?.....I think you need to read my posts again. You are the one name calling.

Reading your argumentative and insulting posts again is not benefiting my Websites development.

In the politest manner possible please "Go Away" :)
 
Reading your argumentative and insulting posts again is not benefiting my Websites development.

In the politest manner possible please "Go Away" :)

But if you did read them again maybe it would benefit your website development.
 
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