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- Jason
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my website
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- Alex Wigmore
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"My collection" Doesn't work I realise when you rollover it you can select the gallery(s) but if you just click my collection it takes you to a blank page.
I can't help but get the feeling you wrote those guestbook comments yourself, but that's probably just me
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I'm not keen on the fonts you've used for the title of the page when you're actually in it, the "Welcome to Jason Thomas Photography" font, I've seen it used a little too much, the basic font you've got at the top is much nicer, especially the "DigitalPhotography" one.
Your logo stands out like a saw thumb, make it transparent (remove the white) or just blend it in to the design, looks a bit stuck on.
A clock? Flash clocks are pretty pointless, as i'm guessing yours works like the others do and just pulls the time from the PC the user is on.
All in all a nice website. Shames it's Flash based though.
I can't help but get the feeling you wrote those guestbook comments yourself, but that's probably just me
.I'm not keen on the fonts you've used for the title of the page when you're actually in it, the "Welcome to Jason Thomas Photography" font, I've seen it used a little too much, the basic font you've got at the top is much nicer, especially the "DigitalPhotography" one.
Your logo stands out like a saw thumb, make it transparent (remove the white) or just blend it in to the design, looks a bit stuck on.
A clock
? Flash clocks are pretty pointless, as i'm guessing yours works like the others do and just pulls the time from the PC the user is on.All in all a nice website. Shames it's Flash based though
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alexkidd
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not particularly keen myself, get rid of the logo or make the modifications mentioned above and ditch the clock, also get rid of the nasty font used for the "welcome to" and maybe move that text up to where it says "digital photography"
also the lines as a background are unpleasant
your links could do with being a different colour (blue?) and then white on rollover rather than grey
the about blurb is a little bit sickly and the join/login i'm not really seeing the relevance to (what's the benefit?) also the slideshow is just the gallery but different and not needed imho
guestbooks are a bit 1999 and can make a site look rarely visited if they're not rammed and if they are rammed then no-one reads all the comments (you'd be better with a testimonials page)
+2p
sorry if it sounds harsh i'm just trying to be as to the point as i can be without insulting
also the lines as a background are unpleasant
your links could do with being a different colour (blue?) and then white on rollover rather than grey
the about blurb is a little bit sickly and the join/login i'm not really seeing the relevance to (what's the benefit?) also the slideshow is just the gallery but different and not needed imho
guestbooks are a bit 1999 and can make a site look rarely visited if they're not rammed and if they are rammed then no-one reads all the comments (you'd be better with a testimonials page)
+2p
sorry if it sounds harsh i'm just trying to be as to the point as i can be without insulting
OP
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- Jason
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thanks wigster.."My collection" Doesn't work I realise when you rollover it you can select the gallery(s) but if you just click my collection it takes you to a blank page.
I can't help but get the feeling you wrote those guestbook comments yourself, but that's probably just me
I'm not keen on the fonts you've used for the title of the page when you're actually in it, the "Welcome to Jason Thomas Photography" font, I've seen it used a little too much, the basic font you've got at the top is much nicer, especially the "DigitalPhotography" one.
Your logo stands out like a saw thumb, make it transparent (remove the white) or just blend it in to the design, looks a bit stuck on.
A clock
All in all a nice website. Shames it's Flash based though
ye i noticed that the other day when i upload the all my other images i willl put them in sections!!!
na i didnt write the guestbook things my self!! didnt even thin k about that *** lol!!
about the fonts!! ok will change it all and take a look then!! tell me what you think
all comments taken in the logo will be changes i think!! trying a few others out atm!!
flash based??
OP
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- Jason
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not particularly keen myself, get rid of the logo or make the modifications mentioned above and ditch the clock, also get rid of the nasty font used for the "welcome to" and maybe move that text up to where it says "digital photography"
also the lines as a background are unpleasant
your links could do with being a different colour (blue?) and then white on rollover rather than grey
the about blurb is a little bit sickly and the join/login i'm not really seeing the relevance to (what's the benefit?) also the slideshow is just the gallery but different and not needed imho
guestbooks are a bit 1999 and can make a site look rarely visited if they're not rammed and if they are rammed then no-one reads all the comments (you'd be better with a testimonials page)
+2p
sorry if it sounds harsh i'm just trying to be as to the point as i can be without insulting
no i like harsh it helps out loads
testemonial??
OP
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- Jason
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a i get you"jay helped out loads and provided some great shots"
"jay is one of the most creative masterminds of the 18th century"
stuff like that
it's similar to a guestbook but less 1999 and more 2009
thanks you