need all your criticism please :)

[phildaintith]

hi guys and gals, iv just made a little website just with my night work on, i have never done anything like this before so i know its probably a big pile of *fill in the blank*

is there any bits you would improve on, change round etc. all comments aappreciated

(it will be add free and will have my own url within the next week)

http://www.wix.com/phildaintith/explorethenight

 

[Alastair]

You need to fix the typos on the text - spelling, punctuation/capitalisation.

And logically.. something can't be straight out of camera and have minimal photoshop use.

How about..

Welcome to Explore the Night
All the photos on this site have been taken with
long exposures between 2 and 30 minutes. Only
a minimum of editing or processing has been
carried out, these are very much what the
camera saw.

The lighting effects and targetted illumination
have been created using portable flashguns and
coloured filters.​

The "about" section needs just as much work, and is there anyway you can show the whole of the text at one time as the scroll is not obvious.

What's the purpose of the website? just to act as a showcase or is it intended to gather either sales or commissions?

 

[On the Huh]

Welcome to Explore The Night, not explore the night...
Straight from rather than strait off. Also: All the surr..not all

Sure I could find more ;-)

Anyhow for a showcase site looks OK.

 

[phildaintith]

haha, my friend pulled me up on my grammar- maaaan i wish i paid attention in engligh class now haha

 

[Alastair]

haha, my friend pulled me up on my grammar- maaaan i wish i paid attention in engligh class now haha

Really?

If you want a hand with it PM me the text.. I can't get it to copy and paste from your site.

 

[phildaintith]

oh and alistar, its basically just a showcase for now, i am tempted to advertise prints just to see if there is a possible market for them.

im also struggling with creating something other than a big title across the top