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- Lea Roberts
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this is the first time i have done anything like this so any feedback would be great, thank you
http://naturalessex.co.uk/
http://naturalessex.co.uk/
Hey, here's what I see:
Home page
Title of the site is just "home". Make it something like "Natural Essex - Home"
Refine the main paragraph - grammar and punctuation etc
Change "Click Image to ..." to something like "Click the above image to..."
Gallery
Same with the title of the page - "Natural Essex - Gallery"
Individual Galleries
I love the little app you're using to present the images when you click on them. v.nice :]
Title of the pages say "Page 4" and "Page 3"
Each page has a Next button (which is a little unreadable), which direct to empty pages
Sorry if that's a load of bad. What I do like is the simplicity of the site, and the fact that it's easily navigable. The colours are pleasant and neutral, which makes the images more prominent :]
I hope you take the above as constructive - it does kind of look like I'm ripping it to pieces. That is not what I am intending on doing.
Crikey I misread the domain name when I first read it! You may want to consider hyphenating it