New to TPF - C&C please on travel candid

[Joshua James]

Hi All,

I've only just found this forum and can't believe how positive it is compared to the other ones I've visited! I don't post in forum's often as I'm still very new to this game but I'd love any C&C you can offer for this shot from my recent (Honeymoon) trip to Egypt.

Anyway - hello to all forum members and I look forward to conversing with you all!


JJ xx

 

[..MD..]

1st things 1st

welcome ..

now the c+c

personally i dont normally bother to click on links .." im lazy like that"
but because your new and the other site have been nasty i did..

to be totally honest its ok .. nothing mind blowing as im sure you new.

the tourists in the b/g are a bit off putting and some eye contact would have been nice.. but then candids are hard so well done you..

hope this is ok...

all imo


md

 

[Joshua James]

fixed the link thingy - sorry!

Yeah this was a bit of a snap shot. Interested in any C&C on the PP?

 

[Gadgetman]

Hi JJ......and welcome to TP

I would like to see a tighter crop

 

[..MD..]

fixed the link thingy - sorry!

Yeah this was a bit of a snap shot. Interested in any C&C on the PP?

you will get more comments with the picture in the thread

hard to cc the pp really mate without knowing what you have done to it..

for me i would like to see his face lightened up also i think the whole image toned down a little


md:shrug:

 

[Jagang]

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and congratulations on your marriage

 

[pearce_jj]

you could try an isolate the subject a bit by darkening the background, a quick bash a bit too much now I look at it, but gives you the idea,

 

[purpleclouds]

Welcome to the site!! It's a not a bad photo for a first post A tighter crop might isolate him a little more!

Looking forward to seeing more!
Phil

 

[joaquimjssoares]

Welcome to the site!! It's a not a bad photo for a first post A tighter crop might isolate him a little more!

Looking forward to seeing more!
Phil

I agree. I think a tighter crop will make the tourists in the bg less distracting.

And now you are in the right forum!

Cheers,

Joaquim

 

[Joshua James]

Thanks to all who've taken the time to respond. I'll definately play with the cropping.

you lot really are a friendly bunch - thanks :0)