Night car photos

[GFWilliams]

Hi,
I have just taken my first shots with my new flashgun of my sister and dad's car - sorry about the quality - I reduced it in Photoshop

1.

2. - not really sure this worked

and my dad's porsche speedster...
3.

Please criticize accordingly

GFWilliams

 

[Kev M]

it's quite hard to see them on my phone but i really like the 2nd and 3rd shots. the first looks like it needs more light on the car. really like the 2md one though.

 

[mole2k]

I think what you could of done with this is tripod the camera and leave the shutter open in blub mode then walk around firing the flash gun at the car from different angles.

 

[Byker28i]

I like the second one. That's worked very well.

 

[Rick]

2. - not really sure this worked

It works for me. i would have liked to see a tiny bit more outlined on the back of the car. just to give the eye a place to finish and follow.

nice though! good job.

 

[GFWilliams]

I think what you could of done with this is tripod the camera and leave the shutter open in blub mode then walk around firing the flash gun at the car from different angles.

That's exactly what I did - I just tried to keep it simple...

Thanks for the comments

GFWilliams

 

[whitewash]

i like your dads car! not too sure on the picture though, but the second one is very nice just needs a quick reworking like rick says

 

[dod]

Second's the best for me. The first and third just seem to be too dark overall. They might have benefitted from being taken at a slightly lower angle as well?

 

[moomike]

2nd shot is excellent imho, just needs a slight outline to the back

 

[GFWilliams]

Thanks for the feedback - I will try again with the photo of the mini roof trying to include the back - I think I need to park the car closer to the garage so the flash is more powerful...

GFWilliams

 

[Gary]

the second one would work if the car was horizontal